Essay 8 Outline

Alexander
11/16/10

Outline of Essay 8

Bell word: lonely, loneliness

Paragraph 1
Hook: have you ever felt lonely
CM: Dill did 
CM: I did
Thesis: People feel lonely all the time

Paragraph 2
Echoes: apart, abandoned
TS: Dill’s loneliness in TKAM
SD: his parents didn’t do things with him
        CM: “they just wasn’t interested in me”
        CM: they just read in another room
    SD: he feels they could do better without him; he feels they don’t need him
        CM: “they do get on a lot better without me”
        CM: they act like he is useless to
CS: Dill was lonely in TKAM and I understand because I have been lonely

Paragraph 3
Echoes: alone, solitary
TS: My real world loneliness
    SD: I stay home alone
        CM: I sometimes feel lonely after a while
        CM: to solve I usually text people
    SD: On days I don’t have hockey or school 
        CM: I see a lot of friends at both places
        CM: I get to spend time with them
CS: I’m not lonely a lot, but I am sometimes

Paragraph 4
Bell Word: lonely
Hook: Lots of people are lonely
CM: Dill is lonely
CM: I’m lonely
Re-Statement of Thesis: you can always be lonely even in a crowd of people